Review Detail of Everythingonurmind in One Piece: Overlord Buggy
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ok as much as I like dumb and corny mcs this take it to the top, like the dude is buggy but 10 times dumber and cringy. to the point where reading this becomes uncomfortable and not enjoyably. this needs heavy rewriting where the unnecessary paragraphs and sentences needs to be ommited in my opinion. and if you move your story you will get more readers.
One Piece: Overlord Buggy
Alekz_YNot
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Also, I do want to say sorry for making it unenjoyable for you, I'm just trying to make a story that I consider good.
Alekz_YNot:Thanks for the review! I would like to say, I do agree there are very much redundant sentences and maybe some paragraphs that are like that (I like to reach an amount of words per chapter), that's obvious, I'm not a professional. I do want to argue that Buggy isn't generally dumb, it's more like he is absolutely freaking stupid with some things rather than others. But arguing over the internet will do nothing really.
Thanks for the review! I would like to say, I do agree there are very much redundant sentences and maybe some paragraphs that are like that (I like to reach an amount of words per chapter), that's obvious, I'm not a professional. I do want to argue that Buggy isn't generally dumb, it's more like he is absolutely freaking stupid with some things rather than others. But arguing over the internet will do nothing really.
I understand, even with the grievances that I have, I am still going to continue reading ur fanfic . keep up the good work and if you move it to fanfic you will gain more traction.
Alekz_YNot:Thanks for the review! I would like to say, I do agree there are very much redundant sentences and maybe some paragraphs that are like that (I like to reach an amount of words per chapter), that's obvious, I'm not a professional. I do want to argue that Buggy isn't generally dumb, it's more like he is absolutely freaking stupid with some things rather than others. But arguing over the internet will do nothing really.