Review Detail of MelodicSnow in Yet Another One : A Science-Fantasy Isekai {HIATUS>RE : Written}

I'm still having a hard time regarding the placement of grammars and verbs that isn't fit on some sentences. By the way, the setting will have some lowkey Sci-fi elements and Contemporaries, a.k.a Near-Future Isekai so no Space-Travelling or the likes... Yet. I'm having some ideas as to have the other Continents and Realms in the world to have distinct mythologies, like a Mediterranean or Middle-Eastern vibe to one of the found continents of Altaris. That's that, and i appreciate for the kind words!