Review Detail of TofSpades in Lunaria

Where do I start... Writing Quality: This was definitely one of it's stronger points; the sentence lengths and paragraphing was great, allowing for a smooth read. The range of vocabulary wasn't bad either, allowing for less repetition. Story Development: I must say the story did develop a bit too fast for my liking. I would've liked to see the introduction of the world to be more fledged out with better world building. I'm not going to say any spoilers but, some things happened a bit too fast and should've been slowed down and described more. Overall, this book was definitely and interesting read. I really enjoyed it and do recommend others to give this one a go. The Author has done a great job and I can tell future chapters will be just as amazing as the present ones!