Review Detail of Strawberry_p1e in A Soul's Journey to Learn Their Origins

Haha 5 stars from the Mr author Imma try give some lead -The mc can be childish sometimes more mature than others, in the earlier chapters yeah he's still immature as I want him to be ahaha, well but since he's not reincarnated it's just good I think? -The mc has high iq and that's his natural skill since his soul was born from 2 soul merging into one and both two soul have a very big willpower to live(means his willpower should also be strong) -Mc's characteristics is inspired by idk who just wanna make it by a character I remembered, a jumbled char ahaha -So my goal is to make a story that everyone likes a enjoy but I'm still very far from that So maybe if you like it can you please share it?