Poor grammar, overuse of exclamation points and too many unnecessary info dumps. Some of the things explained are generic fantasy knowledge that anyone would know or could guess through indirect storytelling. I could only stomach the first few chapters before giving up. Maybe it gets better later on, maybe not, i guess i'll never find out unless the author decides to invest in his own novel and hire an editor.
Alen_Tanor
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