Review Detail of FluffyBunnyKing282 in Universes Apart

So this story is currently from what I heard from my friends, a good idea... but could've been executed a little better, which I understand from what I have been reading myself. So if your expecting a good all-rounder, this story won't be like that... For now, I am making updates and I am hoping that I can make it better in the future. Of course I probably won't start making changes yet because I want to get the story finished and have a good base so that I can start editing it from somewhere. So just give it while alright?