Review Detail of Very_Passon in The Fox Goddess

Ok i checked some later chapters and it seems like in chapter 30 its better and in 80 is pretty good so i will have to force myself to read to get to that point. Im glad cause everything beside grammar is pretty well done

I'm going to start reading now, and I appreciate your question and answer at the same time it got me excited to start reading, so thanks.

I made this comment only taking a look at those chapters, its not really that good, but I can promise you that later grammar is good, just the way novel went was not for me, thats why I dropped it

what do you mean? can you explain me?

like why I dropped it? or the grammar

yeah, why did you dropped it?

Well It was some time ago so I don't remember that much, but most of the characters at least for me had no depth at all. The two companions she had at the forest became typical "little sisters" characters and stopped having any character growth, there is this one shy elf thats thirsting for our mc since she first saw her and all action at that point where I dropped it seemed focused on their little drama, she also had a child somehow? I saw that because i skipped a few chapters to see the grammar. All the other characters are basically enemies, annoying nobles, and weird elf fanboys who are jealous of mc. Well thats what it looked like to me, I may pick it up again tho, cause all these reasons are.pretty trivial and overall when the grammar got good it was pretty solid