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2022-04-10 19:45

Review Time! Oh great here we go again another transmigration novel being into an extra butttt I get why this isn't getting enough attention mainly because of Chap 4. some like it for that kind of 'development' but majority don't and I had to pull through it since you know I like novels like these and I didn't regret it for now. On Chapter 4 yes the title perfectly describes the plot development at that time but hey I got through it and understood why so if you guys can get past that well strangely enough it got better imo, characters are fun and could develop more I personally prefer MC to develop further in the personality department he's bland from time to time and sometimes I feel like he's really an extra but then again he is an extra so I can't complain about that. Writing Quality: Excellent with little to no mistakes, needs an editor (I'd be willing). Power Scaling/Fight Scenes Simple to Understand I got the gist of it since it's the same as The Authors POV so I read it in one take and not having to use my brain to understand how it works, though it needs more polishing but I like the simplicity, Fight scenes could do more work but I can imagine it and it keeps me entertained somehow Updates. I hate how it's like 3-4 Chaps a week if we're lucky it's 5 then he disappears then returns so Idk. MC. I guess this is also why I stuck around, he's broken, but not really broken it feels like he just got a huge head start which separates him from his peers, for those that have read the Author's POV its Ren on steroids, considering he is a legit untouchable Chaebol or Young Master in other terms its perfectly understandable why and I kinda like the lore of his family more than his. Personality. If Ren wants to stay lowkey so trouble won't come to him, MC wants to be the center of attraction, dude basically puts a target on his back Day One so trouble won't come to him, so he's the opposite of Ren in that department other than that, like earlier he needs more development. World Background. Honestly It's intriguing especially with the latest chapter I like it so far, reason why I'm grading it this high is because of the potential it holds other than if it fails to execute then this novel is not gonna make it for sure but we're still early so I won't be too harsh on this area, will update it once everything is established. Character Design. Holds potential my favorite has got to be Yu-na, as for Romance I don't even know if its Harem or not all I know is at least there's one lead. That's all if you guys want to read it go ahead strangely enough author calls it trash but it's somewhat fun and entertaining its a breath of fresh air from those "I'm weak need to get stronger" to "I'm broken but not broken enough" which is funny imo dude still gets trashed but for good reason, again I'm rating this high because of Potential only its up to you guys if you're gonna read it.

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Thanks for reading this far but sadly I don't want an editor I want to learn on my own thanks for the offer though much appreciated :)

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