also, try to make the story have more depth in some psychological vibe I'm not asking for horror but try to think to form some human perspective and realistic little bit so the characters don't turn out to be dumb also that will help us with relating to them and love the story more Extra7 and Author pov did that ^^
Thank you for your suggestions. Because this is only the beginning, I will continue to develop as the story progresses.
secretplotter:also, try to make the story have more depth in some psychological vibe I'm not asking for horror but try to think to form some human perspective and realistic little bit so the characters don't turn out to be dumb also that will help us with relating to them and love the story more Extra7 and Author pov did that ^^
Warlord_Challa:Thank you for your suggestions. Because this is only the beginning, I will continue to develop as the story progresses.
Cheese_curdles:extremely suspicious almost every review are from new lv1 accounts that have no other history