Review Detail of KING_AHLAWAT in OVERLORD OF MARVEL(OMNIVERSE)

There are some Things That Author should keep in mind while writing it that :- ●it should be a story not a summary of it that dosen't feel right here ! ●Some parts should be revised as well ! ● you are taking a lot of time and chapters to just show the girls feelings and history ! that should be minimized ! ● story has a really slow developing plotline ! and i really dont like it ! Maybe you should work on that Author !