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KingDew
KingDewLv141yrKingDew

The main character is weak and pathetic, reading this novel makes me angry, as I expected some sort of revelation or change that would lead to him making better more rational decisions, but he never does.

On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human

Frona_Gorgophone

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immortal13
immortal13Lv3immortal13

It's called being human, stupid

Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneTác giảFrona_Gorgophone

Fumu-fumu. I get the feeling. You have to be patient to be able to stand reading this kind of story, after all! How much have you read if I may know?

Tibor_Paksi
Tibor_PaksiLv12Tibor_Paksi

I agree that MC is pathetic and weak. I mean more than 80% of MC are that way on start, so it cant be helped. Mc will change, so I do not see problem in it. Also MC seems to me enough rational( do not forget he is still very young)

JRCaste
JRCasteLv4JRCaste

I love how positive you are and your response, Can I know if the novel is going to be harem?

Frona_Gorgophone:Fumu-fumu. I get the feeling. You have to be patient to be able to stand reading this kind of story, after all! How much have you read if I may know?
horrendous_potato
horrendous_potatoLv4horrendous_potato

Its clearly marked in the tags that it is

JRCaste:I love how positive you are and your response, Can I know if the novel is going to be harem?
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4JRCaste

I've been in this community long enough not to trust the tags, plus it's very vague topic, it's either going to be a pseudo harem or true harem.

horrendous_potato:Its clearly marked in the tags that it is
Othy
OthyLv15Othy

Well, the protagonist has tiny balls…

Nathaniel_Heston
Nathaniel_HestonLv15Nathaniel_Heston

fun, well if I get to testing it out I'll see if we have a hero or of I can't take any more first.

WitheredRose333
WitheredRose333Lv12WitheredRose333

Average light novel reader that isn't capable of actually reading and following a character on their path, where they progress, evolve or devolve, etc.

FISH409
FISH409Lv2FISH409

can u try my novel too highlord.i need some feedbacks

Death_Code
Death_CodeLv2Death_Code

the tags says #weaktostrong ofc he starts weak haha

Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

yeah and whens that cause if its to far i wont be able to last

Frona_Gorgophone:Fumu-fumu. I get the feeling. You have to be patient to be able to stand reading this kind of story, after all! How much have you read if I may know?
AnotherMadKat
AnotherMadKatLv14AnotherMadKat

weak in mentality too? i haven't read the novel but from all the reviews i have read, it seems the main character never really grew up from the trauma and inferiority complex inflicted on him during his previous life. if that is so reading this wd be a waste of time. after all a demon lord is a king, and a king needs to be intelligent in his decisions as his decisions may cause people's lives

Death_Code:the tags says #weaktostrong ofc he starts weak haha
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneTác giảFrona_Gorgophone

I feel very guilty to only respond now, but yes, it is, my friend.

JRCaste:I love how positive you are and your response, Can I know if the novel is going to be harem?
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneTác giảFrona_Gorgophone

This work of mine emphasizes character development. Most of the reviews were written by people who didn't last past 60 chapters. That is like around 100K words more or less. Layland has changed by the time he comes out of the castle.I mean, realistically speaking, it is quite a feat to grow out of an inferiority complex. Layland is but a young man. Even some adults don't ever grow out of their complex. But Layland will and he has!

AnotherMadKat:weak in mentality too? i haven't read the novel but from all the reviews i have read, it seems the main character never really grew up from the trauma and inferiority complex inflicted on him during his previous life. if that is so reading this wd be a waste of time. after all a demon lord is a king, and a king needs to be intelligent in his decisions as his decisions may cause people's lives
AnotherMadKat
AnotherMadKatLv14AnotherMadKat

Ahhh I see. Well, just some advice, if you are writing another novel, don't make the character look a "weak in mentality" in the first few chapters. I truly do understand your need to make the character lower than average to make a character growth that makes the readers "feel" a character growth. But people don't want to read a realistic growth, but a fantastical growth. An "impossible" growth. Same goes for me. I don't really want to read 60 chapters where the MC is a king and still fail to take rational and strong decisions. Growing out of an inferiority complex is impossibly hard, yes you are right, but it is only in real life. Why do people watch marvel movies? Can people invent a machine that makes us fly and talking AI that express emotions? No. We want to watch impossibility. Just some advice.

Frona_Gorgophone:This work of mine emphasizes character development. Most of the reviews were written by people who didn't last past 60 chapters. That is like around 100K words more or less. Layland has changed by the time he comes out of the castle.I mean, realistically speaking, it is quite a feat to grow out of an inferiority complex. Layland is but a young man. Even some adults don't ever grow out of their complex. But Layland will and he has!
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneTác giảFrona_Gorgophone

That is correct. I was highly idealistic when I decided to write this work, but I don't regret it. I have long accepted this one is not for everyone. Thanks for visiting, tho✌🏻I hope you'll be one of my readers if write another work. Of course after finishing this one😂

AnotherMadKat:Ahhh I see. Well, just some advice, if you are writing another novel, don't make the character look a "weak in mentality" in the first few chapters. I truly do understand your need to make the character lower than average to make a character growth that makes the readers "feel" a character growth. But people don't want to read a realistic growth, but a fantastical growth. An "impossible" growth. Same goes for me. I don't really want to read 60 chapters where the MC is a king and still fail to take rational and strong decisions. Growing out of an inferiority complex is impossibly hard, yes you are right, but it is only in real life. Why do people watch marvel movies? Can people invent a machine that makes us fly and talking AI that express emotions? No. We want to watch impossibility. Just some advice.
AnotherMadKat
AnotherMadKatLv14AnotherMadKat

Yeah... don't stock too much novels. It can ruin your lifestyle 😂

Frona_Gorgophone:That is correct. I was highly idealistic when I decided to write this work, but I don't regret it. I have long accepted this one is not for everyone. Thanks for visiting, tho✌🏻I hope you'll be one of my readers if write another work. Of course after finishing this one😂
Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneTác giảFrona_Gorgophone

It already has😭

AnotherMadKat:Yeah... don't stock too much novels. It can ruin your lifestyle 😂
CGenipperteinga
CGenipperteingaLv2CGenipperteinga

amen to that brother.

AnotherMadKat:Ahhh I see. Well, just some advice, if you are writing another novel, don't make the character look a "weak in mentality" in the first few chapters. I truly do understand your need to make the character lower than average to make a character growth that makes the readers "feel" a character growth. But people don't want to read a realistic growth, but a fantastical growth. An "impossible" growth. Same goes for me. I don't really want to read 60 chapters where the MC is a king and still fail to take rational and strong decisions. Growing out of an inferiority complex is impossibly hard, yes you are right, but it is only in real life. Why do people watch marvel movies? Can people invent a machine that makes us fly and talking AI that express emotions? No. We want to watch impossibility. Just some advice.