This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star. I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments

My favourite book right now. The reason I wake up in the morning😌. Like the author said there is some grammar mistakes but you barely even notice them! I highly recommend reading this book. Thank you for the updates author!

I'm so shocked, I was wondering why the writer didn't publish the chapters in Lucas' novel, but in fact he was stupid enough to write a second novel! And a harem novel! Such a thing would only be done by a fool who wants to increase his reading! I can accept that professional writers will write two novels at once, the writer of the descent of dimensions is a good example of that, his level is very good, the plots of the story are excellent, he has great ideas, he is a professional and that is why it is okay to divide his focus on two works.... but the writer of a survival novel The add-on is just a hobbyist! He did something very stupid, if he had focused more on his first novels it would have been better, I'm sure he was arrogant after he got some credit, but he has already crossed the line.... Personally, I am very critical of what he did.

I ve read to chapter 12 and skipped to some further chapters and honestly I'm quite frustrated. What's the point of having a 'first life' and reincarnating in this novel. It feels like it's put there for the sake of having the word 'reincarnation' in the tags, we hardly get to see the Mc's feelings or ambitions from his previous life, what are his regrets? What's moral and immoral for him? There's a reason why most of these novels spend a great deal at building the mc's backstory. I'm pretty the author would explore the mc's personality further in future chapters using flashbacks or whatever, but at that point people would stop caring about his previous life

If you have a system you are not an extra .. . .. .. .. .. . . .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. . .. .. .mmvvm.m.k... .. .. .. ..

I enjoyed reading this book, it keeps the readers Reading. my only problem is with the grammar. I look forward to reading future chapter that you put out. Have a nice day author San 🥳

I like it. It's pretty similar to The Novel's Extra and The Author's POV. Anyone who's read either can pretty much predict where the story is going to go, which isn't necessarily bad. I can't really say much when it comes to the world and characters because the novel is newer and there aren't a lot of chapters. Character development is really what makes these kinds of stories stand out from the rest; when storylines are similar, it's the characters that determine if the novel is good or bad. Both the world and the characters have room to grow. What really hurts this is the grammar. It's legible, and that's about it. Most of the people on Webnovel probably aren't real strict about grammar, but it's also clear where good grammar is what determines which novels people keep reading and which ones are dropped. A few things I'd like to point out: Run each chapter through Grammarly. The free version works very well. It's a great way to improve grammar. Periods go inside of quotes. I noticed this a lot in Ch. 17. It should be: "Blah blah blah." instead of "blah blah blah". The same rule is true for commas. A lot of the sentences are broken; it feels like words are missing. Finally, use commas. I see a lack of commas in a lot of novels. It's more of an experience thing, deciding where to place them, but reading well-written works helps with figuring out where to place them. I was taught to read each sentence out loud, and to put a comma where I naturally paused. Overall though, it's a good story with potential, worth a try if you like this kind of novel.

I loved reading it before as he tried to remain low key and didn't go into troubles... but then he started saving people, do that save slaves and its fking frustrating to see the character you like change into a fking cliche hero character... sorry i dropped this due to this

Thank for the beautiful story Author. I like the world and characters you created. And i hope you would until the very end. Stort is a bit slow-paced but i like the way you write except grammar. But i too am not a native English speaker so i am not affected. But you can take and editor. Therea are some readers who wants to do it and if you create discord you can communicate and take their help. And i want to ask do you think about increasing the daily updates. Even though not everyday once in a while could be very good for us readers. Again thanks for the story and i hope you continue the writinh until the end .

Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.