Review Detail of Ryu_Is_Charming in NARUTO: I AM DANZO??

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Ryu_Is_CharmingLv22yrRyu_Is_Charming

This story needs to be more unique and stop using cliché to full plot holes and missing backstory. I was too harsh in my previous review that I have now deleted because of the characters name, Dark Demon. I still think that this name ruins the immersion of the story. Like who wants to read about a character with such a ridiculous name? Try to find some to proof read and brainstorm with.

NARUTO: I AM DANZO??

Uzumaki_Kushina_21

Được 22 người thích

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SpoiledSecretsLv4SpoiledSecrets

I’m pretty sure this is a translation

2yr

5

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

Honestly the translation is so bad that I want to read the original with Google translate instead...

SpoiledSecrets:I’m pretty sure this is a translation

2yr

11

TandorisLv3Tandoris

It is, and the original has dropped it

SpoiledSecrets:I’m pretty sure this is a translation

2yr

2

Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

just the synopsis makes me cringe with all the bad english..

2yr

2

JRZTT1246Lv2JRZTT1246

Oh ty for saying that, then I have no intention to read story that'll never finish :(

Tandoris:It is, and the original has dropped it

1yr

UrichLv4Urich

the half of the synopsis is not bad but the other half💀

Gh0st00:just the synopsis makes me cringe with all the bad english..

1yr

LitagoLv14Litago

Hokage! I will never let you be Hiruzen! That is...backwards? Is it not?..... I will never let you be Hokage! Hiruzen!

1yr