Review Detail of Piggy in Primordial Of Power and Ice (reupload)

i felt my iq lower whilst reading this. this is your typical percy gets betrayed by everyone for dumb reasons. if youre gonna have percy get betrayed give better reasons. these are heroes who have fought off against gods of deception and youre telling me theyve been deceived by a child? ugh these types of fanfics really bring a bad name to the others