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Why why why do you need to make him ridiculously OP so quickly? It makes everything so boring. It has so much potential as a storyline but the execution is just completely butchered. Falls into the trap of most stories on this site.
Lord of Fire is a Gamer
Lowkeygoodstuff
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All cool, I know there were some mistakes along the way. I still like the way it is, but I completely understand that there are some people who are unsatisfied with it. Thanks for reading
ShodaiKokyu:It's all good and cool until arc 3, seriously the so-called journey is just about mc fetish about explosion and suddenly there is a (sorry)cringy crossover with konosuba. If only you make this a proper story rather than weird comedic story. Sigh~~ this is fanfiction anyway sorry if i'm a bit harsh Overall 7,7/10 9/10 or 10/10 if you do something about it Peace Out..
It's all good and cool until arc 3, seriously the so-called journey is just about mc fetish about explosion and suddenly there is a (sorry)cringy crossover with konosuba. If only you make this a proper story rather than weird comedic story. Sigh~~ this is fanfiction anyway sorry if i'm a bit harsh Overall 7,7/10 9/10 or 10/10 if you do something about it Peace Out..
Lowkeygoodstuff:You are mostly right, that was my fault. I tried to keep the suspension alive by making him fight other OP beings (like the dragons and the time spirit) and he legit struggled in those fights but I feel like I still shouldn't have made him that strong that quickly.