This is a very nice take on reincarnation and has great potential but it reads like a badly google translated book. An example of this is in the second chapter where the mc was late and said the time is 8:00 apology for the delay in seconds. Which turned me away from the story.
THE_WORDSMITH
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giốngSure, a better version would be “sorry for being late Miss Rosa, a girl pushed me and I couldn’t get to the train in time.
THE_WORDSMITH:I apologize. I will edit that. Can you help me with what a proper version of this would be?