So... we have a male MC. MC is called Jade. A 0% masculine name for an Apocalyptic story. A world that is not yet described, therefore a bit confusing. It would be great if there was a chapter explaining where the MC is.Details that help understand... a tab: World and date. Country, city, place.
Mana_Jimoh
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giốngAUTHOR, You can make an auxiliary chapter, to give details of the characters and the world. For example: - Male main character - Oldyears - Physical features - Occupation: student, driver. Single married. Luck!
Mana_Jimoh:and sorry this is my first time writing something like this, I will try harder to make less errors. thank you.
Mana_Jimoh:okay I will try my best. if you want to add a character or scene let me know, I will Lend you a ear. thanks for you suggestions.