Review Detail of Dave_Zed in The Forgotten Ability

The writing quality is pretty good. Although it’s a bit confusing when describing the inner dialogue. The story flows at a nice slow pace, no plot holes. My main issue is I read up to chapter 50 and the FL has yet to make any significant decision in her personal life. She doesn’t at any point really have a personal choice in what happens to her. Her character doesn’t bother me really, besides for a little over thinking, but the story developement makes for a very passive MC. I prefer a more active MC. Although this might change later in the novel. Thanks for the read