Review Detail of LoligangGal in Multiverse of Marvel

The story is great, i like the system and the updates. There's just one tiny problem i had with the story, the characters and sometimes the writing. First: The writing great but there's some chapter where there's some misspelling and error. Just some of the chapter tho! Second: The characters. Sometimes the characters is a bit...dead? Emotionless? Not entirely dead or emotionless but sometimes. Maybe some people don't agree with me but it's just my opinion K?🤷🏻‍♀️ Overall it's a pretty good read!