You don't put names before dialogue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's only done in plays or movie scripts!!!!!!!!!!!! Why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was really enjoying it until the dialogue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why is it not obvious!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I fell in love with the fic idea and my heart was broken by scriptwriting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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