Honestly the best story I have reviewed on here so far! A vibrant and very detailed world with great world-building and characters. There is so much information put into every chapter, it's honestly really great. It has moments where it feels a little bit like Fate and honestly could be the plot of an anime by itself! My only critique would be that there is a lot of telling the audience what is happening over showing it happening, but honestly everything else is so great that it doesn't really matter. Good job honestly, I shall watch your career with great interest!
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