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TheNeeD
TheNeeDLv22yr
2022-01-20 10:36

Before he got into Kuo, everything was going quite interesting, but after that some nonsense began. With each new chapter, I am more and more disappointed in the hero of this story, as they say, "We thought we were at the bottom, but someone knocked us from below."

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RaizarP
RaizarPTác giả

Let's answer this. He's in Kuoh for only a while, and in the recent chapter he leave Kuoh already. Well, I would appreciate it you read until the latest chapter before giving it a review. If you already read until he leave Kuoh and give this review, then I can only say that it seems that this was not for you :)

Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

I’ll be honest, it feels like he only went to Kuoh so you, the author could bash Rias and the devils.

RaizarP:Let's answer this. He's in Kuoh for only a while, and in the recent chapter he leave Kuoh already. Well, I would appreciate it you read until the latest chapter before giving it a review. If you already read until he leave Kuoh and give this review, then I can only say that it seems that this was not for you :)
PsychoPathReader
PsychoPathReaderLv1

Well than this isn’t for ya too

Fellbane:I’ll be honest, it feels like he only went to Kuoh so you, the author could bash Rias and the devils.
Ayries_Jesea
Ayries_JeseaLv4

No I think the proper word is to babysit the devils I dropped it after seeing only mc babysitting the devils

Fellbane:I’ll be honest, it feels like he only went to Kuoh so you, the author could bash Rias and the devils.
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nathan_nektor1369
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ZYZ
ZYZLv4

(very long rating) it's not a good dxd ff but not a bad one either it's just a "normal" dxd ff nothing special as this ff is like any other dxd ff out there sigh I dont know why authors waste the potential of the dxd world it has so much to offer, its always starts with the mc being reborn trains then time skip then the mc goes to kouh town like cant you make it more interesting the dxd world has so much stuff in it and still there all the same for example the mc goes on an adventure to get stronger go to the Norse meet the Norse God learn some stuff like runes help Odin with his wife(bull some bs)and get rossweisse as waifu or the mc can go to the Greek gods fight them(some are arrogant)lose(still weak) go to the underworld where he will meet hades, hades trains him come back and kick Zeus asś get his acknowledgement and also can get hestia as a waifu is so easy and I have another problem the mc isn't insta op but there is no difference we only know he trains and all of a sudden he can beat satan level it's the same as SAO Krito is op and we know he works for it but we didn't see so it makes no difference it's the same here if the author had more imagination and let the mc go on a adventure meet different gods, characters,mystical beings,monsters that never appear we will seeing the mc get strong not only will it be entertaining but we feel as the mc strength is well deserved as we follow him in his journey but sadly only a small amount of dxd ff do this not only dxd alot of fanfics as well and most of you may say "oh so why don't you make your own fanfic" thing is I want to so badly I have so many ideas but I'm always busy and I think its unfair to start a ff and just drop it well 3 stars from me not bad just ordinary

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