Review Detail of AKIHIKOHAYUTA in The denied one

PS: I fixed my errors starting in chap 4, sorry for the writing format in chap 1,2,3 THANKYOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU It won't post if i didn't do this haha