Review Detail of Masked_Narcissist in Re: Life - Business & Technology

Good story. Ngl, I saw similar one's but they usually end very fast so I hope yours's isn't like that. It has potential, I do want to point out that the pace is usually steady and good, but sometimes the pace rushes a little to slowly for my tastes, but that's just my preference though. Good job man. You might want to change a few words to make it more dynamic, and fix a few errors, but well done, hope to see more from this novel.