Honestly, it's decent in my eyes. GOH fans would probably enjoy it more since it's a fan fic and can understand what's going on much better. With some googling and wiki searching I managed to get some clue ins on the world here and there. The plot so far seems alright, but again GOH fans would probably enjoy it more than I have. Other than that, I hope the author improves upon their grammar and punctuation (there was also the rare spelling error) as it's a weak point. Good job author. 👍
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Liked it!
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