Review Detail of JoseDavid07_11 in Tales of Asura (FF Version)

It is not a bad fic, but I think it needs more attention and to go deeper, almost nothing is explained, how his life has been before awakening his powers, his way of thinking, his goals, his relationship with close people, etc. He also entered Xavier's school but everything was fast, in only two or three chapters, his interactions with the other characters were not seen, he got a girlfriend and we did not know how, we did not even see a single dialogue with her, nor does she appear, part of the deaths and separation of the x-men, you only mentioned it and that's it, so it's a story with an interesting idea, but poorly worked, it's practically a summary of what happens and now (just my opinion), of all the anyways, good luck! (Google translator).