I like the premise and the idea behind the story; however, I don't think this was executed in a way that shows its full potential. There is a lot of refinement needed which is very common in new authors, and a lot of grammatical errors that need to be fixed. The first impression is everything, I recommend at least fixing up your first few chapters to hook in the reader! I hope my review helped!
Ashu009
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