After reading chapter 21, I would say that I'm satisfied. This fic definitely has a ton of potential with the unique idea. So far, there are barely any grammar errors/mistakes, with the few mistakes barely being noticeable. The world background is Naruto, so I don't need to say anything about that. MC is Itachi and actually acts like him, so that's a 5 star for character design. The stability of updates is definitely 5 stars, and for the story development, I'll do 5 stars as well since the story is progressing really nicely, without any holes in the story (At least, until chapter 21). TLDR; Good story about Itachi, with Itachi actually acting like himself for once. Hope you don't drop Author-san and hope you keep up the good work :)
Darker_Than_Black
Được 7 người thích
giốngIn my opinion, it's kind of hard to judge so far, but I would say kind of like a hero. Although he kind of acts like a hero, it's not like those beta-male MCs who do every heroic action and stuff. He does stuff when necessary, but doesn't do it otherwise. I'm not sure if this description is correct, but this is just my take.
SpoiledSecrets:How is the personality of the MC? Is he a hero or more of a villian?