Review Detail of ProSpect in Harry Potter: The Celestial Fox ( English Version)

It is a bit strange when you say about the translation when it is clearly mentioned that it is an automatic translation and except for the first two chapters and the last ones from 42 onwards they are one of the few that have received a good scrutiny so far and still does not ensure excellent quality. The updates are one chapter a week, which I think is pretty good, but hey... I don't know what's going on with the mc, I'd like more details, I think he's been well developed so far. Talking about the world is also a bit out of place. This is a fanfic so the world is already widely known and established and as the story goes on, more is explained about it. I even think I'm pretty descriptive about environments.

so ?? even if its machine translated, the least you could do is do checkups on it... updates i looked at the final 5 chapters (between C41 and C42), there is an 2 months of empty space I just dont like the low effort of the MC (he is like the green haired freak from MHA), also, if you were to take out the MC, nothing changed from the original (maybe i just didnt get far enough)

The time you say is true, but that was a small hiatus and since I returned, I have tried to make the broadcast constant with a chapter every Saturday, in addition to being long and worth almost 3 common chapters. Regarding the translation, well I would also like it to be better, but I don't have something like a content editor or anything, so I am limited in this. On the other hand, not being a native speaker, I don't know if the reading is perhaps too robotic or just not very fluent when reading, I would appreciate some recommendations if you have them. For the MC thing, well, this is something I'm trying to change and you'll see more and more in the future, the effects of his existence and his being an AU. In the latter, if I admit that I am guilty, when I just started writing I was very attached to the canon and that is why there was such a problem, but there are small details that are notable for now.

idk about the translation its pretty good specially when you compare them to other fanfics in webnovel and the character is decent hes nothing like "the green haired freak in mha" which i assume is deku theres no difference in the story because there are no big villains appearing yet and no big events