Review Detail of JStyles in Naruto: The Wandering Blacksmith
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The start is really good then it suddenly goes from 100 to 0 in 1 chapter. Characters making really stupid decisions Mc's father a ninja who knows jutsu almost died to a normal guard The plot is so forced This story could have been really good
Naruto: The Wandering Blacksmith
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"must maintain balance" "go to konoha" "make weapons for them" the balance thing ruined it he should have just said to seek refuge in konoha as they will accept an uchiha What his father said gives him no option except to become a slave for konoha because until "the balance is maintained"
what_if_3574:For the guard stuff, you have a point. I'll edit it a bit to make more sense. How else is the story forced? I'll try to fix as much as I can.
Yeah, it's supposed to be stupid since that's an excuse that Haru uses in order to chase Ryu away. It's not an actual thing.
JStyles:"must maintain balance" "go to konoha" "make weapons for them" the balance thing ruined it he should have just said to seek refuge in konoha as they will accept an uchiha What his father said gives him no option except to become a slave for konoha because until "the balance is maintained"
what_if_3574:Yeah, it's supposed to be stupid since that's an excuse that Haru uses in order to chase Ryu away. It's not an actual thing.
what_if_3574:For the guard stuff, you have a point. I'll edit it a bit to make more sense. How else is the story forced? I'll try to fix as much as I can.
what_if_3574:For the guard stuff, you have a point. I'll edit it a bit to make more sense. How else is the story forced? I'll try to fix as much as I can.
Oh, I should probably update the synopsis. I'm in the military for the next three years. It's fun till now, though.
Secret_Strm:how was/is the year of service?