Review Detail of Luv_cattos in New Place, New name

I don't really want to offend you but the info dump bothers me a little bit. It's quite can confusing at first but the plot story was great. I think your story will improve a lot of you add more dialogues in it. Each chapter was very short but I sort of understand a little bit since some of the readers could get boring if the chapter was too long. I don't really understand how your magic system works so I had to read all of your chapters twice or more. The introduction of the characters quite confusing as well.