Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Monarch Butterfly

Here are my thoughs about this novel based from what I read so far: World-Building: I genuinely like the school environment and even the character whereabouts. It's quite decent and I think as slice of life, it's fine one. Character: I really like the character in this story. They are all have different personalities and quite likable. I also like that the author give a good characterization of the adult which is great. However, I do want to see all the main cast or even the side character development and develop more the monarch of butterfly concept in future chapters. Overall, I think this one is solid slice of life story with deeper meaning and metaphorical. However, I am sorry to say this, I suggest to reduce the wall of text into two or three paragraph to give some break time for the readers eyes. Keep up the good work!!!!