Review Detail of ResidentialPsycho in Project: iaseki V1

This series is good practice for something that is probably one of the writer's first attempts at writing a novel. The action is confusing, and the sequence of events are hard to follow. Imagery is almost completely absent. Even little things like describing facial expressions or the MC's thoughts would help a lot. The setting and background are full of holes. A more dramatic start would involve narrating the MC's actions as he lives the last day of his life and start from there. Little is known about him, which makes it hard to connect to him. There are a number of plot holes. The MC was supposed to be an expert in this game, yet he doesn't know about aurum or how to sign up at the adventurer's guild? He doesn't have the basic common sense of this world at all. One character who identifies him as a aurum and works with him anyway later forgets all about it and attacks him again. Is the MC starting as a low-level player or is he in his original body or using his maxed-out stats or what? None of this is clarified. Since he was injured and in bed, I pictured him as wearing nothing but a pair of pants or else nothing at all. However, no one's mentioned him being topless or barefoot. Aside from his dark eyes and hair color, I don't know what he looks like at all. Maybe he weighs 400 lbs and is covered in tattoos or ceremonial scars. I have no idea. There are a number of unanswered questions here, and the writing just buzzes by them. I feel like I'm reading a plot line summary rather than the written story itself.