I just read this and it's not that bad I actually do like it, it's just there's not enough chapters. Am I personally like when we're going slow but I would like to have more chapters.
Thanks for the review, I've kinda lost motivation for writing novels and mostly focusing on reading novels lately. Since you gave me this review, I've reignited my passion writing novel, I will release my next chapter asap (the writing style might change a bit)