Shameless review once again~ I am not english speaking native, so some grammar mistakes is to be expected, but i am sure you guys will be able to understand my writing. Also No harem! Yay anyway i hope you guys enjoy my book!
Alekzi
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giốngAlekzi-sama, I come to this comment with 3 goals. 1st: I'm not sure where I could reach you, so here, where it's official and has a comment from you, is my only hope. 2nd: I wanted to inform you that I am Brazilian, from Brazil, and that I am a big fan of yours! This work is, at the same time, an old concept, but innovative, with a plot, for me, exceptional and well constructed, with unexpected paths (like Ichiro meeting Azura in Night's End or the Book of Etiquette). Nowadays I feel like a gold digger looking for gold in the world of webnovels, there are only a few works compared to the sea of crap that is released monthly. Martial Arts System for me was like finding a medium to large piece of gold; and for that, I would like to thank you for creating it. And, thirdly, I would like to ask you not to give up on this work, I understand the natural blocks that can come when writing a work, and I respect you even more for having decided to pause it instead of simply continuing anyway. However, I would be very happy if someday (hopefully soon) you returned to writing, because I've been coming back practically every month since your hiatus to check for any updates and it would just be a pain not to have a continuation of this work of art. Thank you again and I apologize for possible grammatical errors. With love and hope, a fan.
I had to decide a nationality for my MC, I cant make finnish MC bcz no one would understand his name, I wanted to make japanese name bcz Imo it sounds cool
Reimoss:First of all, the reviews are mostly made by fake accounts. Second of all, you're obv not japanese so why t f do you use those names?
and Idk who are fake and who aren't, I am not the one who is doing the so-called fake reviews either. I like honest reviews bcz it tells me where how I can improve my writing. Like it is nice to know does the dialogues feel robotic, etc.
Reimoss:First of all, the reviews are mostly made by fake accounts. Second of all, you're obv not japanese so why t f do you use those names?
And you chose the worst one, when I see japanese names I skip. You could've chosen the most basic english name but you had to go japanese.
Alekzi:I had to decide a nationality for my MC, I cant make finnish MC bcz no one would understand his name, I wanted to make japanese name bcz Imo it sounds cool
Reimoss:And you chose the worst one, when I see japanese names I skip. You could've chosen the most basic english name but you had to go japanese.
arekuruutento:lol who cares if u skip?, the author likes the name so you put up with it or you leave xD
arekuruutento:lol who cares if u skip?, the author likes the name so you put up with it or you leave xD
no harem? and here it goes in my reading list and author san will there be romance or subplot(I hope there is atleast sub) and if there is will their be many love interest (girls intrested in mc) or not and will the fl be introduced early or later in the novel if there is any that is. and if there I will suggest not to have a weak fl to whom mc have to save evertime(one twice is ok or how our mc will impress her) plzz give answers of u can and yeah I don't understand how can a mc name be a problem to people?🤷🏻♂️
its_L:no harem? and here it goes in my reading list and author san will there be romance or subplot(I hope there is atleast sub) and if there is will their be many love interest (girls intrested in mc) or not and will the fl be introduced early or later in the novel if there is any that is. and if there I will suggest not to have a weak fl to whom mc have to save evertime(one twice is ok or how our mc will impress her) plzz give answers of u can and yeah I don't understand how can a mc name be a problem to people?🤷🏻♂️
its_L:there are whole stories out there cringe let alone a name so ya that's bearable
Alekzi:and Idk who are fake and who aren't, I am not the one who is doing the so-called fake reviews either. I like honest reviews bcz it tells me where how I can improve my writing. Like it is nice to know does the dialogues feel robotic, etc.
I was going to say something but I forgot what it is but we people has our own preferences, personally, when a name is too cringe, I won't pay attention much to the name and focus more on the story then I would forgot about the cringey name after I do that... hmmmm, it seems I remembered what I was going to say, lol
Reimoss:And you chose the worst one, when I see japanese names I skip. You could've chosen the most basic english name but you had to go japanese.
Alekzi:I had to decide a nationality for my MC, I cant make finnish MC bcz no one would understand his name, I wanted to make japanese name bcz Imo it sounds cool