writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ some words are missing in most of the paragraphs but it's not a big problem. story development ⭐⭐⭐⭐ 4 stars because you failed to discribe some of the scenes which caused me to have a hard time imagining things but over all it's good character design ⭐⭐⭐ all the characters are good except the female characters 😐
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