Review Detail of lilhawk in Tales of The Dragon Sovereign

Shameless author here, I would rate my story 5/5. This is my first story still i rate it very highly, i know Not to toot my own horn but this is a really well-thought story with immense world-building and character design. I hope you can excuse the not so impeccable grammar in the first couple of chapters. The writing style improves as the story goes on trust me on this one