Review Detail of kidd17 in Rise of the Demon Monarch

Honestly at first I thought you keep using your mc full name is continuing to the next chapter. It's good novel, but trust me, you don't need too using '(on the way to school)' you should write like 'on the way to school, someone pat Irwan shoulders, and he looked at behind him' it's good to read. But it's a good plot I like it honestly. Keep going!