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TheViciousVillain
TheViciousVillainLv22yr
2022-08-22 02:27

R serious?? it was good at first but...seriously?? Kushina?? HIS OWN MOTHER?? Well this is too much, I can't take it anymore. Naruto...reincarnated as obito....my fav character... to degrade it to this level...such a shame...no....shame on you ....naruto would have never acted like that...I'm so disappointed. Then again IT'S an AU...but still... you didn't say anything abt naruto character change and abt him dating "his own mother", no to mention the age difference as he was now reincarnated as 'Obito'. (The only good think is the grammar and the world back ground)

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SrMori
SrMoriLv13

Good fic Didn’ like where you were heading with the pairing so I decided to drop. Kushina… Really? I honestly don’t get why you made Naruto get reborn as Obito when you could have had an OC reincarnate as him Would have made for a much better story

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Barnacleboy
BarnacleboyLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Zerodusk
ZeroduskLv14

The book is very well written. I'm highly looking forward to the future of the book. There isn't much I can write about since there is only one chapter but there is one thing to note is that I have nothing bad to say which is an achievement since I can usually find something bad for the author to improve his book. Definitely want more!

2yr
Lyrical_Ivo
Lyrical_IvoLv14

For starters the mc awakens sharigan at 4 which everyone knows but decides to hide his abilities in the academy like all these lowkey mc's do. On top of this, the author is making a villian out of every girls original partner. for example: Minato, Fugaku, asuma. On top of this hes twisting narutos personality to much. both him and obito were pretty much the same person until rin died, but hes making him think like a calculating mc. And of course he's villainizing hirzuen so naruto who idolized the man doesn't trust him. this story will be a lot of nonsense so i'm not even going bother anymore. DONT WASTE YOUR TIME OR GET YOUR HOPES UP

2yr
fanfun
fanfunLv14

I just don't like that it's going the harem route and the Minato is secretly a second danzo route. not going to lie I saw this coming the moment The only characters being introduced were girls.

2yr
DaoistIszN4K
DaoistIszN4KLv1

Advice from a brother to his brothers, do not read this nonsense ................ Contains love at first sight for every girl........................... .................................................. Silly events

2yr
AStrAl_Soul
AStrAl_SoulLv4

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2yr
michael_copeland
michael_copelandLv15

its an interesting concept, especially with the magic systems being centred around science and technology. they are a good match. I'm looking forward to how this story progresses!

2yr
Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5

I like the story ......................................................................................................................................

2yr
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