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SuicidalRussian
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The writing and grammar is great as expected from Cornbringer-san, the story flows smoothly and it's not a constant 1st POV sometimes. The only problem, or what's lacking in this FanFic and also in author-san's other FanFics, is the description of how the MC looks like. This might not be a problem for some people, but for readers who need something to imagine... it's hard to "see" the MC doing things when you yourself do not know how he looks like... hoping that there's a good enough description soon. Still, it's a great FanFic.

Naruto: World of Warcraft

CORNBRINGER

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God_Negro
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grammar is less than ok.

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God_Negro
God_NegroLv2God_Negro

I mean writing

God_Negro:grammar is less than ok.
God_Negro
God_NegroLv2God_Negro

and it don't make sense. plot is not on point, nobody gets a skin, op lad, author skips fights