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Review Detail of Kurotora in Harry Potter and the White Death Eater

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Kurotora
KurotoraLv142yrKurotora

This story has an interesting beginning plot. however once the MC is sorted it takes a turn for the worse and just keeps going. one of my biggest peeves about this story is how the author uses "enchantment" for spells that are charms or hexes or jinxes and it's specifically stated in canon that those spells are charms or hexes or jinxes.

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Harry Potter and the White Death Eater

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I must have made a mistake, it happens.

Ewan_Richardson
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Please update the white death eater