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Writing its good - Stability its good too - story development its not that great, its just following the plot of mha with oc, - character design its not that great, " mob , really, its a saitama with hair , dont like his design " world background - well , nothing. my reviw its a good diary, the story doenst have interactions, its jut the mc telling u a history , so a diary, doenst show reactions of those around, ( like i said its a good diary, but sry i dont have motivation to continue reading, maybe in future if u resolve this proble, or if its that what u like on u writing, but good luck )
The power of control
DaoOfPusy
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first, thanks for the honest review. second, yes, most of your points are correct. the mc doesn't really do much for the first 20 or so chapter, it's more of an introduction to the mc, his powers, his character, and the world around him. you're treated like you've never heard of mha before, which, if you've been ingesting fanfics like it's water, can get boring pretty quickly. don't worry though, since there will be some canon divergence coming up (i got major stuff planned, exciting) the only thing I'll have to correct you on is the character design part. mc looks more like a buffer, taller version of mobs brother, ritsu. as for MC's power, while its base is mobs psychic abilities, it's just that, a base for cool stuff to be built upon. i hope this has made you, and anyone else reading this, a bit more excited for the story lol. it's bad im even doing this the writing should do it itself
DaoOfPusy:first, thanks for the honest review. second, yes, most of your points are correct. the mc doesn't really do much for the first 20 or so chapter, it's more of an introduction to the mc, his powers, his character, and the world around him. you're treated like you've never heard of mha before, which, if you've been ingesting fanfics like it's water, can get boring pretty quickly. don't worry though, since there will be some canon divergence coming up (i got major stuff planned, exciting) the only thing I'll have to correct you on is the character design part. mc looks more like a buffer, taller version of mobs brother, ritsu. as for MC's power, while its base is mobs psychic abilities, it's just that, a base for cool stuff to be built upon. i hope this has made you, and anyone else reading this, a bit more excited for the story lol. it's bad im even doing this the writing should do it itself