Review Detail of NNN_CCC in EX:Acceptance [Route 1]

I started this novel months ago, with the intention of turning it into a light novel with illustrations in the future and a series of related works. One day in a video game, maybe. I paused the project for a long time, and it actually hurt. Unfortunately, it has happened many times to not receive feedback, and consequently, to feel miserable ... But now I have sent these thoughts away and I try to publish a chapter almost every day, so, if you happen to be around here give me your opinion , let me feel that you are there, so I will be more and more motivated to continue. Thank you.