Review Detail of NobodyW in Zero System

Author's blatant assessment! Hello everyone, I'm Ninguem and I wanted to ask you, if possible, to help me increase the engagement of this story by donating power stones, commenting on the chapters or evaluating the story. I also ask you to give me constructive criticism, after all, I am a Brazilian "writer" who needs a google translator to work on webnovel, so I need to let go of my use of slang and popular expressions in Brazil in my stories, as often the google translator translates this slang wrong, leaving the story confused. Whenever you see something like this in my stories, don't hesitate to tell me. Finally, thanks for reading "System Zero".