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Ok so after reading story and giving it a fair shot I personally don't like it. The Story is a good idea but it's all over the place too much is happening randomly without context and it's just honestly hard to enjoy it. Not a bad story per se I've read way worst but it's just too messy, The plot makes no sense at all.

Retirement is just the next great advancer.

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Will try to smash some plot in place next 2 chapters or so thanks for the help.