Review Detail of ALiVe in The Life of a ghost across the Multiverse! *Old* *Rework in progress*

This is honestly amazing. The writing is very good with little to no grammar errors. The world background is fine, since it's a fanfic it doesn't need much work regardless.The story has been developing so good I'm honestly hooked. There is also great updating stability so far, the only thing is character design, but that isn't serious enough considering it's not needed in a fanfic as good as this. You don't really notice that there are little to no descriptions of the character.