Review Detail of Hanadji in Deleted foreverrr

I really, really like the premise. The title is seriously promising for a really good book, but I have two issues with this novel. First of all, the synopsis, or lack thereof. Just saying “try it” makes me reluctant to try it as it seems you have no idea what your novel will be about. It is eye catching, but I’d prefer if you explained what happens in the first few chapters of the story, maybe introducing the major plot? For example, the guns. Second of all, some of the speech bubbles are missing quotation marks. This wouldn’t be something I bother with, but your writing style makes it hard to discern between text and speech sometimes. Now, this is still a good novel with a lot of potential. Just looking at the cover tells me that author-san is a new author, but I can be patient. Improving the synopsis, improving the cover and remembering to add quotation marks do wonders for first time readers of your novel. All in all, a 5/5, but the mistakes and the synopsis bring it down to a 4.8/5. Lovely novel, thanks lots and don’t be discouraged by my criticism!