Review Detail of SASAKI in Deleted Work

I like the quick twists on the story which gives the readers a kind of a roller coaster ride kind of type of build up but sometimes the drops or twists are a bit too heavy. Try giving it a bit more buildup. The characters' personality can be seen fairly well through their way of communication and their development are decent but I like it that way. Take your time to review your stories too before publishing, Typos and the likes are alright but it's a little more relieving if you take your time to review your story and not rushing it. It can be a little stressful, so take it in a pace you can catch up. Keep up the good work, mate! <3<3<3