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Review Detail of DjMikah in Disciple, Don't Cause Trouble, Master Won't Leave the Mountain!

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the story was great , till the plot was suddenly changed and you feel like you are reading a different story there wasn't even a transition from now on there will spoliers the MC got a domain , in his domain he is invincible with points earned from killing enemies (or disciple killing enemies) and task the MC can raise the domain's size. and the mc doesn't know anything about cultivation or cultivation world. suddenly (with no transition what so ever) the author is a strong cultivator outside his domain. his sect name change and he got a lot of knowledge about the cultivation world .. it's just like two stories smooched together. and i feel like i wasted my time. i mean even with the transition thing author could at least make the transition a smooth one. for example at some point heis system gives him a choice or something but here none of that happened you are reading untill you feel like you're reading something different / another story

Disciple, Don't Cause Trouble, Master Won't Leave the Mountain!

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read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed