Review Detail of Username_is_valid in Seemingly Impossible (Mha Fic)

The aimless monologue is irritating and irrelevant. The reader can read until chapter 6 and then skip to chapter 23, which will make no difference. For some reason the author thought it was a good idea to give MC 6 quirks, in the situation where Endeavor had to have an arranged marriage for one of his children to have 2. The extra supporting characters are well done, but I don't really care about them. Whether they are there or not makes no difference from a story continuity point of view.